It was an interesting read, even though slightly abrupt at times. Still, I am pretty confused how personality works. Its description is basically different between the downloaded and browser versions. I played the light to theme, no stats, and the personality description basically ignored the cunning stat that was the highest as long as any other stat rises to a value higher than zero.

this is actually AMAZING. I love Axis sm

I can't wait for more!!! This was definitely one of my favorite interactive novels I've played!

I love this story so so much 🥹🥹🥹😭💖 Looking forward to future updates. Fantastic work! 💖

haven't played yet but will rn !! low-key hoped that the king would be an RO cuz it would've been such an interesting dynamic lolz, tho the other ROs sounds sooo amazing, Kyliah seems the most promising rn but we will see if that changes when i actually play the game <333

edit: have played it and he is still my fav, such a sweet guy fr <3

omg just finished the chapter 2 and is the king obsessed with the mc/player because if he is, i am begging please make him a secret love interest or something lolol. i love remus to death, and severin too. 

love and want them all dowwwwwn bad. 

So glad I found this! Loving the story so far and characters. Will be keeping an eye on this for sure!

THIS IS PEAK

I'm here for this 😊. Its a promising start! I rly appreciate the timely update! Its reassuring

Very Good i check back frequently and I am Happy to see an update so Soon. Great interesting story interested in how It progresses 😁Kyliah is Sweet. There are several Gender errors (Female pronouns in chapter2, when usingTheyThem pronouns errors such as "they want*s*"), Missing letters/words and some Mis placed characters. Has Little effect on reading but I thought I would Let You Know.

Its an interesting game and i enjoy the world and story but i cant help feeling that the mc is... useless? they lack any form of agency and cant seem to do anything themself, i know they dont understand the world around them but it really feels like you could give the mark to any of the other characters and there would be no point to the mc. also the personality system locks in a little too early for my tastes

Hihi!!! Just want to say that this is a wonderful game!! It's really neat! However there seems to be a lot of gender bugs in the game, while playing with male pronouns selected most of the time- especially in chapter 2- everyone refers to the player with female pronouns occasionally (there's even a magician which gives you a rose who call the male player a lady) and it sorta put me off a bit or even confused me at times because I thought the characters were referring to a different female character. (I'm playing in the browser version though so maybe that is the issue?) Anyhow I love the theme of this game and the godly vibes/magic going on :DD can't wait to read more when it comes out!

hi here to say that i love the game so far ,every character look super interesting (the mc above everyone) i arrived at one point that finish with "fear".   

Is that the end of the capter?

Again love the game very much can't wait to see more 

I'm totally loving chapter 2! Even though I read the beta version, now it feels like I'm reading a whole different chapter, with all the new things that have been added to the public release. The only thing I didn't particularly like, was the fact it doesn't tell you when the chapter ends, but other than that, amazing game! Can't wait for the next chapters!!!  

I love this game so far! The premise is amazing and im already so hooked on the story.

However, I did come across a few pronoun errors(?) in turns 60 (When Kyliah was speaking to Axis), 66 (when the street magician speaks to mc), 75 (when the maid apologizes to mc), and 77 (when the guard was talking about mc to Remus). I had chosen he/him for my mc's pronouns and occasionally instead of 'he' it'll be 'she' while talking about mc

Hi I would like to report an error

 I am stuck in this part of Chapter 2(turn 74),When I click "Continue," a black screen appears

I really like the game's setting and plot development！

 only one question: which LI is the yandere?

Hi there, love the work so far. However, I've encountered an issue early on which stops me from progressing at all. After falling asleep after the attack and on the page where the character wakes to the sound of a scream there is no option to continue, no option to select and only an a/n to go back and meet axis, and even if I do I come across the same issue again and again.

I want to keep playing but I have no idea what the issue is. If it helps, I'm seeing a lot of the text being pushed down to the bottom of the screen, so is it possible that its a hardware or software issue?

Your plan for the story is certainly one of the more intriguing ones I’ve encountered! I see that chapter 1 has only recently been released, however I greatly anticipate the release of more interactive details and chapters to the game :D 

In short : me like your game 🧌

On the page that starts with "You can't help but notice that they haven't asked you what happened" and ends with "Only one thing brings you comfort now, when everything else is so foreign and unfamiliar," there are the four options that give you points towards your divine dominion. But if you click the "Divine Dominion" button after choosing one of the options, and then you click "return to story," it takes you back to that same page where you can choose one of the options again. You keep the points though so the page can be farmed repeatedly for infinite points. Not sure how much these points will matter later on but I wanted to let you know in case. Also, the game puts mine as death even though celestial is higher. I tested it with other combinations as well and death seems to be locked in once I've picked it twice (4 points) no matter how much I pick the other options or in what order.

hi! just played this for the first time. firstly, i would like to say that im intrigued by the premise and am looking forward to having more of this story!

some feedback:

• on the last page, there is a typo where you wrote "intersts" instead of "interests"
• while i like use of music to set the tone/ambiance, for me, i found that it changes tracks too often and veers into being distracting/grating rather than supplementing the vibe - specifically, between when you leave galen and when you wake up with kyliah and remus, i think the track changes 4 times? additionally, and this might just be a me thing, i found the tracks to be on the loud side.
• this might also be personal preference, but i found axis' introduction to be kind of jarring. he shows up out of nowhere with a dragon, and it feels like the MC does not have the choice to be as freaked out by this guy as i feel a sane person would. i kinda wish i had the option to run away from him immediately LOL

anyway, my MC currently has the sage of light personality, and im keeping my eyes on remus and severin romance-wise. looking forward to the next update!

Didn’t expect the addition of “relationship” part, and I’m very happy that the changes are made! And many thanks to the fixed bug 

Though I find out again that IOS isn’t able to see the character customization part QAQ (Guess my next phone won’t be Apple lol)

ooh this seems very interesting so far! looking forward to further chapters <3

A very interesting start! Can’t wait to see more :3  Currently my personality is Flameheart.

For me my favorite RI is Severin because I take a liking to RI who has a rather cold personality :)

Though I do realized that when I played the game on iOS phone, the “save”, “load” and “restart” don’t work out of error, but the “saves” button is fine.

will there be other romance options?

I'm definitely interested in this so far! I also like the little personality test aspect to it.